The Pulse

Adventure

I was in the kitchen with my Mom when the sky changed for the first time. As scary as it was, the pink celestial haze and glowing streaks that painted the sky were really quite beautiful. 

Everyone heard the thunderous roar as the sky cracked, we all stepped outside to look upon the change. Dogs barked, people stopped to look. I watched some neighbours start praying, weeping as they feared what this could mean.

And that’s when it pulsed. Softly, like a gentle heartbeat, a subtle continuous pulse.

A car suddenly screeched to a halt and crashed into Mrs Robinson's hedges. My father, the man he is, ran from our front steps to help, not even realizing the other car speeding towards him.

“Dad, look out!”

A larger pulse shook the earth, lit up the sky like a sunrise. The car speeding towards my father was mere seconds from hitting him when it suddenly vanished, taken by the light. Less dogs barked, less people cried, and when I turned, my mother was gone.

Me and Dad watched the news while we ate, we had to hope that Mom was safe. The news that day was unlike anything I’ve ever seen. An “Uncategorized Cosmic Anomaly” they called it, but soon we mostly called it the pulse. Some called it Aliens.

On the TV, helicopters circled survivors in the Sahara, people who had been at home reading the morning paper were now suddenly in the desert wearing housecoats. Congressman found on Chilean fishing boats, Buddhist monks found wandering West Virginia.

It wasn’t just people who were moved.

Drone footage circled a highrise with a sedan barely balancing on the balcony. Palm trees shivered in the Alaskan wind, as Ostriches walked up and down our boulevard.

Everyone was advised to STAY INDOORS but it didn’t make a difference, thirty hours after the first pulse hit, the second one came.

Then a third.

It wasn’t until the fourth pulse that I became a victim of that pink sky.

I stapled the missing persons poster to the telephone pole, just one of the hundreds hung up by people searching for their family. I looked at the photo of my mother, as I heard the faint pulse begin. Part of me hoped every time that the sky would bring her back.

The pink light flashes, and I’m suddenly somewhere new. The cold sea air hits my cheeks as the smell of salt water fills my lungs.

Where am I?

A young boy in his pajamas, cries nearby in the grass, clutching a spoon in his hand as he looks around frantically.

I drop the staple gun, crumple the poster in my pocket and approach him slowly. “Hey, hey are you okay? Do you speak English?”

The boy shakes his head. At least he understands me.

“It’s okay, I know this is scary,” I try to convince myself as much as him. “I’m gonna try to find out where we are, let’s try to get home.”

He pulls himself to his feet and puts the spoon in a little pocket. He reaches his hand up and grabs mine.

We walked for what felt like hours. I felt bad for the poor kid, he didn’t want this. None of us did. After a while we found some help, an older man who told us we were in Greenland.

It would take time for us to get home. Planes were on a thirty hour schedule, since pilots could just disappear, so we had to wait out the next pulse before we could get on a plane.

The young boy disappeared. At the same time in his place, a donkey appears in the man's kitchen.

A seaplane took me back to America, I cabbed as far as I could until the next pulse spit me out on a country road.

The streets were empty so hitchhiking isn’t as much of an option. I walked for hours roadside until I saw a light. Up the road I see a sign displaying:

SHUFFLED REFUGE INSIDE

Heading in I saw a group of people wearing large backpacks. They were setting up cots for sleepers, handing out blankets, rations and small backpacks for others.

A woman wearing a blue shirt with a homemade KNOT written on it “Hi there, have you been shuffled?"

“Shuffled? Like, you mean the Pulse?" I answered.

“Whatever you call it. Come in, sit. We’ve got go-bags ready for any new stragglers.”

Her name was Gloria, she told me who they were.  “We call ourselves KNOTS, tying people together, we’ve been handing out aid in case you get shuffled in the wrong spot.”

“Shuffled?”

“Think of it like cards in a deck, taken out, shuffled around. Some don’t move, some go back, but everything gets shuffled around.” She gave a half hearted smile.

I felt a little hopeless hearing that, sure there's a chance I’ll get sent home, but more than likely I’d just be teleported somewhere new. The pulse was so random, it displaced everything from people, trees, cars. Who knows if I’ll ever get home.

Gloria offered a kind hand of reassurance, her eyes tired but steady. “The Pulse won’t stop,” she said. “But neither will we. Every knot tied makes the world a little stronger.”

I wanted to believe her, to think Mom was safe, maybe even walking through a refuge like this one, tying herself into another knot.

The sky lightly pulsed, another shuffle was coming.

Just then I spotted someone, the little boy with the spoon! He made it here! I looked at the crumpled photo of my mom. If there was hope for him, surely there's hope for her too.

As the sky flashed pink, something inside me just knew I was going to be shuffled in the pulse, but with my new KNOTS backpack on, and newly ignited hope in my heart, I was ready.

The sky pulsed, brighter, its sound growing louder.

The pink light pulsed, and just like that, I vanished.

Comments 13

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Gwen PemOctober 25, 2025
oooo very cool to see some sci-fi here. This reads like the final journal entries of survivors. The ending was so eerie
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KimCSeptember 30, 2025
This is sooo good Brodie, I want more... where do you go next, what happens to little bit with the spoon, do you find your mom???? I need answers... please keep going.
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Chris GairnsSeptember 23, 2025
Amazing Brodie. Wonderful story telling.
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Megan DiamoreSeptember 23, 2025
This is such an amazing story!!!
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via MGSeptember 23, 2025
such an amazing story!! The plot was spectacular and the ending left me wanting more! I could see this becoming a novel series of the main character getting more in depth with the story behind the pink sky!
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Margo MMSeptember 23, 2025
Amazing story! Your storytelling pulled me in instantly! In a time of uncertainty, there was still hope for tomorrow. Such a captivating journey that I didn’t want to end!
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Janna knightSeptember 23, 2025
This was amazing! I can’t wait for the movie! Great job!!!
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Jenn DoanSeptember 23, 2025
What a great story! I could’ve continued ready as it kept me engaged wondering what would happen to the main character next!
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Michelle McPhersonSeptember 23, 2025
I enjoyed the story. I wanted it to continue, to find out more about the characters and the pulse. Where would he end up next and would he eventually meet up with his mother. It was fun
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Short.story.obsessedSeptember 23, 2025
What a fantastic story- felt anxious at some points, hopeful at others. The way you captured the feelings of the character to draw us in and invest in the outcome was remarkable. Great writing skills, left me wanting more!
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SUNSSeptember 23, 2025
This is such a cool story, I love the idea of the pulse being this teleportation device! I could seriously see this being a movie, with the way you've described so visually how he gets shuffled from place to place! I would love to see more of the tension building; the pulse is such a drastic and intense concept, it would be cool to see how it affects the main character! Like, for instance, do the places he gets shuffled to mean something to him? Is there a sacrificial element to him being transported from one place to another? If it is random, how does it change the main character's thoughts, emotions, and even concept of time and space? Anyways, absolutely loved reading this one!
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IshikaSeptember 23, 2025
Great concept! and even cooler characters.
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Lucas.September 23, 2025
Cool. I liked the concept of this; like a teleportation where you don't know where you'll end up. It made me curious as to what was causing the pulse and if it would ever end. The concept was neat but I wanted more nuance to the characters